Extending our writing one word at a time

Look at this fantastic writing from within school and sent in from those working at home this week.

We have been working really hard to move from writing labels to writing sentences.

We have been thinking about how we can make our sentences a little bit better one word at a time.  

We first of all wrote a label to name the fruit.  Then we added a capital letter to start our sentence.

Next we chose a word to describe the size of the fruit and then we added a word to say what colour the fruit is.

Extending our sentences

Our sentences are fantastic now and tell us much more about the fruit than a label does.