15 January 2021

This week for English, I set a task for the children to create their own list poems based on the book we are reading in English, 'Leon and the Place Between'. I was so blown away by the quality of the writing I had seen from you guys, that I had to showcase a few examples on here. They really were excellent examples of list poetry and I'm so proud of how hard you've all worked on these, in class and at home. 

Sit back and enjoy reading through these. 

Magical List Poem - James

 

The crowd fidgeted

Impatiently

The curtains twitched

Curious

The curtains slowly parted

Excited

Magic show tonight

Believe

The lanterns went out

Nervous

A soft blue glow lit the stage

Spooky

A loud hush

Eager

Everyone waiting

Anticipation

It’s going to be magic…believe!

 

Magical List Poem

 

Let the magic begin

Cool

Crowd fidgeting

Exciting

Lanterns go out

Scary

Curtains Twitching

Weird

Curtains slowing parting

Amazing

By Nancy

 

 

Alistair

List Poem

 

Magic doves fly around

Excited

Believe in magic

Wonder

Lanterns black out

Scared

The air is silent

Nervous

The curtains twitch

Terrified

A light on the stage

Starting

Magic gloves disappear

Wow!

Magic! I believe…

 

Josephs List Poem

The Great Yorkshire Show

 

Daddy Wakes me up early

Sleepy

Drive to the show

Excited

Sausages Ready

Burnt

Check the sheep

Carefully

Look at tractors

Huge

Clay Pigeon Shooting

Brilliant

Get ready for the young handler class

Nervous

Walk around the ring

Slowly

Judge pulls me into line

Excited

Spot Jumps in the air

Naughty

Second Prize

Proud

Back to the Horse box

Party

 

Katie

List Poem

 

Magic fills the air

Wonder

The lanterns go out

Whispers

Darkness fills the show seats

Excited

The golden show tent

Hushed

Lights fills the stage

Glowing

The curtains ripple

Swirling

Doves fly high from behind

Fluttering

The magician takes my breath away!

 

 

Posted by Mr Moore

Category: Mr Moore Year 3/4 2020-2021




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